Daniel flys through the air clinging tightly onto Barder's back. Faster he crys, and Barder obideges. Daniel understands that the turban he is wearing is what allows his flight, but he does not know why. The wind attacks the boys face, but his turban keeps him safe and protected as Barder continues to pick up speed. The boy's dog barks in excietment and begins to slow down. It appears he spotted something far below him on the ground. His excitment obvious by the wailing of his tail, Barter lands light as a feather on the ground. He runs up to a bowl of food, and eats until he is full. Meanwhile Daniel, on his back has fallen asleep. Once Barder can't eat any more, he lays down to sleep, the boy still on his back. They will awaken again, and the boy wants his rest.
Thursday, September 17, 2009
Barder's Story
There is a little kid 5-6 years old. His name is Daniel. He is wearing jeans, a purple sweatshirt, and an orange turban. Daniel has a pet, a dog named Barder, but the turban that he's wearing, and his dog are no completely ordinary. While Daniel is wearing the orange turban, his dog Barder can fly.
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This is good, the sentences might be able to be structured differently. But still good.
ReplyDeleteNot bad, but some of your sentences could be structured differently.
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